Take Up the Cross – CH50: Grand Distortion – {Neversetting Sun}

Take Up the Cross:

Chapter 50: Grand Distortion – {Neversetting Sun}

 

There we went! Welcome to chapter 50, the conclusion of a long time coming!

Beginning as utter wretches, we now begin to see what five fools can accomplish with a bit of teamwork!

 

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~ nonothing

Take Up the Cross – CH42: Freshest Outlook

Take Up the Cross:

Chapter 42: Freshest Outlook

 

Writing a sex scene like that after having ones that are usually shorter due to circumstances is liberating, but also hard to do. Going from beginning to end is like mixing art with ero, where you’re fighting yourself from rushing to the conclusion so you can build to enjoyment.

 

I’m often wondering if I’m not giving the girls enough time to develop and be loved, I imagine that everyone will have a favorite. I want all four girls to be my favorite… but it’s hard to do that! Harem is difficult to write for if you want good characters!? Someone please help me. Still in particular is hard to nail down, because she is very proactive in comparison to the others and has her own goals.

 

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